Help me improve this character? (Fantasy/Multiverse)

Honestly, I love her the way she is, as a character.

My only advice would be to re-write the areas that you are unsure of, and go through with a grammar comb.

Since you're looking to revamp, perhaps aging her by 10 or so years, and writing the difference? A lot can happen in 10 years to change someone. Age her by ten years, and see who she turns into!

:D

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